2016年6月英语六级作文点评：在线学习（文都）

【题目要求】

　　Directions: For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on e-learning.Try to imagine what will happen when more and more people study online instead of attending school. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

　　【参考范文】

　　With science and technology developing, an increasing number of people prefer to study online instead of attending school. Indeed, e-learning has become a common phenomenon.

　　There are two factors leading to this condition. For one thing, with the speeding up of modern life rhythm, the internet, to a large degree, plays a dominant part in our daily life. Thus, there is no doubt that it offers us many advantages and makes our life more convenient and efficient, ranging from online meal booking to reading online. Additionally, it is a more advanced approach to access to essential and useful information. By clicking the mouse , any stories and information what I want at any given time and site can be accessed. Consequently, that’s the reason why a large number of people prefer to choose the way of studying online.

　　Admittedly, much useless and false information abounds on the internet. It is advisable for us to reading more carefully and critically.