2015年6月英语六级满分作文解析

考前预测命中出题方向

不出意外，15年6月六级写作再次连续考察名言警句型作文，三道考题分别涉及：知识与实践、做小事和好奇心。第一篇适用于第二道真题“做小事”。其中一篇“教育”适用于第一道真题“知识与实践”，第六篇“人生哲理”适用于第三道真题“好奇心”。考生如果之前背过，应感觉并不难写。

下面对三道题目逐一加以解析。

2015年6月英语六级考试作文真题第一篇：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it。” You can give one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

命题分析

本题要求评论英国教士Thomas Fuller的一句名言：“知识是一种财富，但实践是打开财富的钥匙。”并要求可以给出一个或两个例子来阐述你的观点。显而易见，本题考查理论知识与实践技能之间的关系，这是雅思[微博]写作反复考察过的话题。

写作思路解析

1、本题首段应该通过理论知识与实践技能之间的关系引出主题；

2、第二段可以进行举例论证，列举自己参加兼职打工、志愿者活动等亲身经验证明实践技能的重要性；

3、尾段可以进行归纳结论或提出建议措施：一方面我们应该努力积累理论知识，另一方面我们应该积极培养自己的实践技能。

参考范文：

Would you want a doctor to operate on you who has only learned about operations from a textbook? The answer to this is obviously a resounding “No!” Knowledge gained from books must always be complemented by knowledge gained from actual experience, to be of real value。

For me actually practicing a particular action or experiment myself and experiencing the result, leaves a much deeper and lasting impression than what I get from simply reading or listening. If I read about how to write an essay or listened to someone talk about writing an essay, I still wouldn’t feel that I knew how to write an essay until I wrote one for myself. It is the case, however, that writing the essay would be based on the methods I learned intellectually. The same can be said for other skills, like sports, for example. A person can know all the rules of a game, associated skills and strategies, but until that person gets on a court with a ball in motion, the theory remains flat, useless。

To sum up, as to theoretical knowledge and practical skills, the latter is certainly more important. Just as British churchman Thomas Fuller put it, “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it。”

参考译文

一个大夫只学过课本上的手术知识，叫他给你主刀你是否愿意？显然，这个问题的答案是一声响亮的“不”。书本知识要有实际价值，就必须同实践经验相结合。

对我来说，实践某件事，或者说亲自去尝试某项活动并感受最后的结果，要比读书听课给我留下的印象更深刻，更持久。如果只是读到如何写作，或是听别人讲解写作方法，我觉得自己还是不会写，非得亲自写一篇才行。当然，实际写作中也会用到以前学过的写作方法。掌握其他技能也是一个道理。以体育为例，一个人可以通晓所有的比赛规则和相关战术技巧，但除非这个人上场打球，否则那堆理论就是呆板无用的。

总之，对于理论知识和实践技能，相比之下，实践经验当然更重要。正如英国教士托马斯 富勒所说：“知识是一种财富，但实践是打开财富的钥匙。”

2015年6月英语六级考试作文真题第二篇：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way. ” You can give one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

命题解析

本题要求评论美国作家Napoleon Hill的一句名言：“如果你不能做伟大的事情，那就以伟大的方式做小事。”并要求举出一到两个例子支持你的观点。显而易见，本题考查做小事的重要性。

本题其实来自于2013年6月的四级真题：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words。


在这道四级题目中，儿子问父亲：“爸爸，我有点担心核废料的处理。”父亲回答：“如果你能到了这儿的垃圾桶，你能做任何事情。”题目为做大事之前做小事的重要性，应了一句古话：“一屋不扫，何以扫天下？”2015年6月的这道六级写作真题其实与上述四级真题一脉相承，几乎是原题重考。

写作思路指导：

本题第一段应该通过做大事和做小事的关系引出主题；

第二段可以进行举例论证，列举自己身边的例子或社会热点例子来支持自己的观点，如雷锋、焦裕禄等等；

第三段可以进行归纳结论或提出建议措施：大部分人都没有做大事的可能性，但细心做好每件小事就是成功。

参考范文：

Success is something that many people strive for, but that not everyone among us attains. When we consider the various factors that play a role in determining whether a person is successful in life, ambition and action are wtwo of the first to come to mind. Just as American writer Napoleon Hill put it, “If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way. ”

Numerous examples can be given, but this will suffice. A young person who aspires to be a great chef might decide to buy some cookbooks, spend weekends practicing and refining his culinary techniques, or take on a part-time job at a local restaurant. On the other hand, if he simply end up spending all has spare time surfing the Internet or playing video games, neither of which would give him the skills or experience needed to succeed。

In conclusion, doing great things and doing small things are both essential in determining whether we flourish or fall behind. The former gives us the drive and direction to move forward, while the latter enables us to implement our vision and “make things happen”. In combination, they represent the winning formula that will put us firmly on the road to success。

参考译文

成功是许多人所追求的目标，但这个目标非每个人都能实现。在考虑到决定一个人是否成功的因素时，我们最先想到的两个因素世雄心与行动。正如美国作家拿破仑 希尔所说：“如果你不能做伟大的事情，那就以伟大的方式做小事。”

可以给出无数的例子，但这个就足够了。一个渴望成为伟大厨师的人，或许会决定买一些烹饪书籍，或是把整个周末的时间用于改造自己的烹调技巧，亦或是在当地的一家餐馆里从事一份兼职工作。相反，如果他只是将所有的闲暇时间用于上网或玩电子游戏，这些都不能为他带来成功所需的技巧或经验。

总之，做大事和做小事都是决定我们成功与否的重要因素。前者给与我们前进的动力和方向，后者使我们能够积极主动地实现愿望。而把两种因素结合起来，才是我们走上成功之路的秘诀。

2015年6月英语六级考试作文真题第三篇：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on Albert Einstein’s remark “I have no special talents, but I am only passionately curious. ” You can give one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

命题解析

本题要求评论美国科学家爱因斯坦的一句名言：“我没有特殊的才能，我只是狂热地好奇。”同时要求举出一到两个例子来支持自己的观点。显而易见，本题的主题是阐述好奇心的重要性。

写作思路指导：

本文第一段应该通过爱因斯坦的这句名言引出主题：好奇心的重要性；

第二段可以举出一到两个例子阐明自己的观点，例如爱迪生搞发明、牛顿发现万有引力、华罗庚学数学等等；

第三段可以进行归纳结论或提出建议措施：如何培养自己的好奇心。

参考范文：

Complexities of human psychology are unlimited, very complicated and often difficult to comprehend. On characteristic of human beings is seldom to be satisfied with what we have and often to want something more or something different. Just as Albert Einstein’s put it, “I have no special talents, but I am only passionately curious. ”

If there was no curiosity, we would still be living in the stone ages. Most of us are driven to do things in the most efficient way possible, which leads to experimentation and innovation. This is why we no longer use ice blocks in our refrigerators and why we drive motorized cars instead of horse drawn carriages. We have taken this proclivity to a positive extreme by investigating every aspect of the tangible and intangible world, in the name of satisfying our thirst for knowledge and understanding。

Generally speaking, most people know that they are prone to being curious with the outside world and some try harder than others to control it. How we recognize and deal with these feelings will dictate whether our outcome is constructive or destructive。

参考译文

人的心理无限复杂，复杂到往往难以理解。人的一大特性便是很少满足现状，往往想获得更多的或不一样的东西。正如阿尔伯特 爱因斯坦所说：“我没有特殊的才能，我只是狂热地好奇。”

如果没有好奇心，现在的人就还会生活在石器时代。大多数人都在寻求最高效的做事方法，从而带来实验和创新。正因为如此，现在的冰箱不再用冰块制冷，现代人坐的是汽车而不是马车。为了满足对知识的渴求，人类探索着有形和无形世界的方方面面，从而将这一天性善加利用。

总之，人们多半都有对外部世界有好奇心的倾向，只是有些人将这一倾向控制得更好罢了。人们如何认识并处理这些情绪将决定其后果是建设性的还是毁灭性的。